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Aquila ([personal profile] aquila1nz) wrote in [personal profile] lytwriter 2022-01-24 06:28 am (UTC)

The bad way is way too many epithets, I think the same pronoun things is why there are still sooo many "the blonde surgeon kissed the brunette."

Names are good, you can use them more than you think.

Other than that, find some stories that do it well and break it down. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.


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