Oh, that's so cool. I never considered Elizabeth/Janet but I love it. Headcanons are great. I actually read noncanon relationships more often than canon because... I don't know why. If it's canon, I need less fic?

Second, yes, that really helps. The names aren't awkward at all here, and there's no confusion re: pronouns. Very close second person perspective. I'll be looking this over repeatedly as I write.

Very honored you shared this with me. I look forward to reading the whole thing!